Review+Writing

(This is a work-in progress page... please ignore the mess)

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To Start:
//Most// of your reviews are pretty good, but here are three things that pretty much everyone needs to work on.

1. Be specific.

 * Talk about one time you went to the restaurant, one specific type of phone, etc.

2. Tell the story of your experience.

 * Tell it like it's a story! Start at the beginning of your experience and go to the end.

3. Be as descriptive as humanly possible.

 * Don't tell me something is "good." Describe it, and make //me// decide it's good. Use the best adjectives you can find and use lots of similes and metaphors.

Bottom line:

 * **After reading your review, I should feel like //I had the experience that you did.//**

//Before you do any more work on your reviews, you need to complete Review Analysis Assignment #2.//

//This is an excerpt from a great review about the Kindle (the full review is 7 pages long). Notice how much description goes into the product, how you feel like you are opening the package.//

1. Click Here to Download and Complete Review Analysis #2.

 * Submit it to the School Loop Dropbox (Assignment Title: Review Analysis #2) when you're done.

2. Update your first review and make sure you've written your second review (for an ST Event).

 * Check your reviews against the three criteria above.

3. Turn in your second review to the Review # 2 Folder.
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 * It will be shared with you on GoogleDocs today (assuming you filled out the form correctly).